Joemike I love the describing words that you have used, I knew you had been on a roller coaster without you having to tell me. I think that you need to add pictures to your poem that relate to your poem, not just any pictures you like
Hi there, my name is _Blake Ross and I am a `student in room 5 at Yaldhurst School. I really like your senses poem. It made me think of I should make one. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://ymsblake.blogspot.co.nz/
Joemike I love the describing words that you have used, I knew you had been on a roller coaster without you having to tell me. I think that you need to add pictures to your poem that relate to your poem, not just any pictures you like
ReplyDeletejoemike you need to add pictures that relate to your poam just saying
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is _Blake Ross and I am a `student in room 5 at Yaldhurst School. I really like your senses poem. It made me think of I should make one. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://ymsblake.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteOkay, Thanks Blake!
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